Posted by Bry pretty good 2nd half U cld have made it A little bit more interesting by doing A few thngs like for one you could have put A little bit more thm fucinto the presentation of when and where they fucked,maybe have them suck each other off almost to the brink of cum A couple times thn have thm fuck and such thngs like tht,make it more exciting somehow,make it A little longer the reasn I say ths is I rd it and it seems U wrote it in A rush,and lst thng not sayng u dnt but take ur time.
Posted by bdd sweet
It was a diwali night, lanterns and crackers made the night bright; everyone was thrilled as one of the most joyous celebrations of year took over the small town of Roha. Doctor Shantanu was sitting in the front office of his sanatorium, brooding over the latest issue of psychology journal. Shanty had learned over time to keep himself busy, he had dedicated his life to his patients and it seemed like everything had taken a backseat in his life. But life seemed to have left him 5 years back!