Posted by Mike What a total load of shit!!!! Why have you bothered???? If this is your fantasy and you want to share it with us all that's great but first put some effort into writing a decent version of it that makes sense.
Posted by andy It was my first and I haven't had time to fix it untill today of which I did.
Posted by Criggee dont bother....or if you do..at least let me put it into correct English for you first
Posted by curran wow!
Posted by curran i liked it
Mike, the center on their team, was a tall good-looking guy with dark hair and eyes and a subtle smile. He had just come from the showers and was still wrapped in his towel. When he lifted his leg I took a quick look at his long uncut cock and low hanging balls now resting on the bench...