Posted by John Omg u rlly need to write a sequel I want to see what happens next love ur story 3
Posted by Tyler that was so hot! make another one please
Posted by Raymond Omg is all I have to say... My dick stayed hard through the whole story. I loved every thing about it and can't wait for more of you and the jock keep it cumming ;-)
Posted by rawr Keep going. this is good.
Posted by Juan Gonzalez very hot! please right a next chapter
Posted by fred Great start, ready for the next installment.
Posted by geo omg. this story captivated me. great use of humor. i give 11 outa 10.
Posted by Neil (from England) I enjoyed it. I'm curious to see what will happen next. Altbough I'm bi, I definitely hope this story has a gay outcome. Nice job mate.
Posted by Neil (from England) I enjoyed it. I'm curious to see what will happen next. Altbough I'm bi, I definitely hope this story has a gay outcome. Nice job mate.
Posted by Zeus i think its great story. Loved both male and female make-out. Real great
Posted by Robert Can't wait for the next one. this was awesome dude
Posted by Lamont This story is doing everything that u wud expect so... PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ HURRY WITH CHAP. 2!!!!!!!!
Posted by Joel Ryan...that was a great story ...had lots of interseting elements....the chemistry /heat between the 2 main characters was so intense ...unsure who I related to more,Ryan or Eric...sure would like this story to continue ...it sure stirred my chemistry
Posted by zeo hi,
your story is really good !
i wanna read more !!
Posted by ken good story, i enjoy all the detail, you dont need to change anything. it got me going and i just wanted to read more and more. i would like you to get in contact with me at some time. thanks again.
Posted by Tyler Would love to see this continued :) See where you take his feelings, how he handles being gay/bisexual. I love how you tied it together. How they actually developed something more than drunken sex, even if neither knows it.
Posted by daniel You gonna write more bout this story cos wanna know what happens next?
Posted by Ryan Hey guys, just to let you know part two is posted and up in the erotic stories section.
Posted by jackson I'm sorry but I'm a bit of a Greek mythology nerd and aphrodite was the Greek goddess of love not sex, and she was female as the 12 Olympus gods were equaled out with 6 men and (aphrodite being one) 6 women but really good story
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