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Posted by Athan
The story had a good thought behind it, but you seemed rushed. It could be a great story if you had taken the time to describe each thing more in detail. I understand it's a short story, and that's the feeling you wanted it to give, but as it stands, the story didn't even get me hard. ._.; Sorry.
Posted by cocksucker
is it just me or did this seem to much like a copy of the first detention story (without the detention of course) try not to rush it, let the story unfold and write itself, and try to make it slightly more orginal, a good way to do this is to base on ur own experience
Posted by normal st8 boy
it sucked cock, pretty much like all u fags!haha
Posted by Marcus
Yeah, I noticed a lot of gramatical errors, which means you obviously didn't spend much time on this story. I thought this story would be hot, but it didn't get me hard either.
Posted by raymond
great story got me hard nice and slowly keep up the good work
Posted by chris
amazing keep it coming
Posted by james m
i enjoyed all of it! you should make a different one with diff characters and instead of the kid really enjoying it have him hate it at first but still want more. and make the jock more dominent! :p :)
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