Posted by Nate Phillips Wow... this is amazingly well written, good story, nice detail. I got it two thumbs up.
Posted by Stephan Cosado Wow! What acool story. Id wished I can write one time like this.
Posted by Vincent Ngang Nice story. A similar thing happened to me when I was in Vietnam.
Posted by john Great work.one of the best I've read. I felt like I was there.
Posted by Riley This is one of the hottest stories ive ever read
Posted by David great story, so realistic
Posted by Roderick Adan Estel Wow I love your sory you should read some of mine on this site too!