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Posted by Mike
A very confused story - lacks structure - could be ok but needs a lot of work!
Posted by mark
I actually like this story, I don't think it lacks structure at all and I don't find it confusing. It's perfectly understandable.
So much better than other crap that is written on here. At least this isn't too rushed or straight onto sex. It has a real story.
Good work. Looking foward to ch 2
Posted by boo
I agree, great story
Posted by Ambassador
NICE....keep it up!
Posted by Nate
Eh... you need to work on your stories a bit. The sex part was fine- all the stuff leading up to it was a mass confusion of contradicting facts. At one point you didn't even remember your character's name.
"but I believe it was 50 First Dates. Anyhow, the seating arrangement was Me, Madison, Michael, and Chelsea."
I wasn't aware that there was a Michael in the story. =/
Beyond that, good effort, and keep writing.
Posted by Ken
Got a little confused on the names for a moment but otherwise I like the content. Please keep writing, it'll come together.
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