Posted by jardonn I'm not in to piss, but I loved this story. Lots of very hot action and descriptions. Two suggestions: break it up into more paragraphs (easier to read) and find other words for "cock" (dick, unit, meat, penis, whatever). Thanks for great story. Got me off.
Posted by mtn_bear Great story and I LOVE piss...would have like to piss on this guy as well!
Posted by kathy that was totally hot. i love bi guys and if your into golden showers it's all the more better
Posted by IRishred great story lots of idea actions thx
Posted by Steve Very enjoyable indeed. Only wished your character had actually pissed in the slaves hole as he fucked him. What do you think?
Posted by anthony this story was absolutely amazing. I have wanted to be dominated like that by someone for so long it has been one of my fantacys. I wanted to just let you know that ur an amazing story writer
Posted by BOBBIE ROESEKE Thank you for this great story. I have cum all over my computer.I would love to be someones little slave.Thank you again
Posted by James "WOW" Piss on me please
Posted by iluvcock fags. what is wrong with you guys?