Posted by john i liked it so much. you are a real dreamer seymour. keep going. i want to know what happens when they find out about their dads and the crash
Posted by Loyd Finish it was good.
Posted by jack excellent stuff. keep it up
Posted by music7044 Awesome story. Please finish!
Posted by chris oh my gosh that was beautiful i love it can't wait to read thje next chapter.
Posted by shawn loved it what happen next
Posted by Mike An interesting story albeit a little confusing it parts - it will be interesting to see what happens next ....
Posted by stephen please take this as honestly as you can... i mean this in the most constructive of ways... please proof read the next part lol.. if it hasnt already been done i guess i havent looked yet
Posted by Shaun This story is to amazing 4 u not 2 finish it plz give us the next part
Posted by Romeo This story is to good for you not to finish it.
Will Kenny and Robert find out about their fathers and the crash? Will it break them up or draw them closer? Will they also find out about each other past love?
Please finish, it's to good not to finish.
Posted by Jankyn I am in awe of your ability to just captivate me with every story you submit. I was so drown in what with the raw emotions n all. Most writers dont get that its the plot that gives the ultimate lovemaking scene its power...well-done.
He’d managed to swallow me and I could feel his nose nuzzling my scrotum and realized if he didn’t quit that humming he was doing, I’d explode. Since there didn’t seem to be any way to tell him to slow down while my mouth was full, I just did the same to him...