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The Price For A Lifetime of Happiness reviews

Posted by john
i liked it so much. you are a real dreamer seymour. keep going. i want to know what happens when they find out about their dads and the crash
Posted by jack
excellent stuff. keep it up
Posted by music7044
Awesome story. Please finish!
Posted by chris
oh my gosh that was beautiful i love it can't wait to read thje next chapter.
Posted by shawn
loved it what happen next
Posted by Mike
An interesting story albeit a little confusing it parts - it will be interesting to see what happens next ....
Posted by stephen
please take this as honestly as you can... i mean this in the most constructive of ways... please proof read the next part lol.. if it hasnt already been done i guess i havent looked yet
Posted by Jankyn
I am in awe of your ability to just captivate me with every story you submit. I was so drown in what with the raw emotions n all. Most writers dont get that its the plot that gives the ultimate lovemaking scene its power...well-done.
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