Posted by Terkish Wow...nice story. Keep up your good storytelling, sir!
Posted by mark not sure about this story. i like it, but you really should have some speaking text in it. it's hard to tell when someone is talking.
look at what you have read before posting it.
Posted by Daniel dude that was a GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD fucking story let me know when you write you other one
Posted by Viker Dat gud between u and Jeff. I cant wait 4 d continunatn. Love u guys.
Posted by J Deane love your storyes