Posted by Jack I loved the way his words evoked the erotic sensations the author was experiencing while relating this tale. Now i'll hace to go for a shower & if he fancies joining me - he's more than welcum!
Posted by nine bob note A well-written story that evokes a really horny atmosphere, although the language does feel a little 'flowery'. Sometimes you feel the author is going off into his own flight of fancy, trying to find as many different ways of describing a cock, or an orgasm, or an ass. Although this is much more preferable to using the same words over and over, never using the same phrase or word more than once can begin to sound contrived in a story this long. but like I said, this is a well-written story that certainly made - and kept- me hard!
Posted by Charles Hamilton This is good example of a tale and erotica.
Posted by Beebo I am a chick, and I still got off on this! Well written, better than the usual schmuck that gets posted here!
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Posted by mike dude that was so hott and i would love to jack off with you sometime.
