Posted by Dave DAMN!!! YOU HAD ME JACKING OFF !!!
Posted by Travis MAN! I love your story! It's awesome! I love the fact that you incorporated the physical and emotional attraction, not to mention the passion when they made love, which is truly what it was. It wasn't just sex, it was love making.
Posted by Fernando Degollado How could the writer pretend that he went to high school in the states and went to a university? He can't even tell the difference between first or third person in English, or the difference between past or present, or at least tell when to use on or in... I love the story development but his lack of proper structure let's me know that it is a made up story by a foreigner.
Posted by Fernando Degollado Self Correction... I love the story's development....
Posted by waeem its a beauty love story n also a true love story
Posted by drew great job writing this..MORE!!!
Posted by Romeo I love your story. I think it's a joining of emotional and physical with a lot of passion love making! Write a sequel but PLEASE check your spelling and grammer!
In other words, finish the danm story!
Posted by Josh SO HOT!
Posted by albsexy MMMMM a nice sexy storey shame it took so long I hope you will still see each other