and god will definately see them
Posted by biggie72 I`m black myself but at least have a sense of mind
Posted by NiggazSlave you got smeway terrible in (CREATING) .:.
Posted by Muneeb Kaderdina Is that true?
Posted by Cris yes plz write more
Posted by Will You asked for it. You're a retard. I couldn't even read half of it because you had so many typos.
Posted by anbm1 I've read badly done stories before, but this is definitely one of the worst!!!
Firstly, it's quiet obvious NO ONE bothered to proof read this terrible trash, the spelling is bad and the grammar is lousy!
Secondly it shows both what LACK of understanding many white people have of Blacks in that,the verbiage as usual is off. MOST Black folks just DON'T speak as these characters, it's the kind of trash I'd expect from Margaret Mitchell!
Even the rape is suspect; (probably) most Black men AREN'T into W.S./Scat and the like, the long history of degradation and violation we've suffered physically, sexually and psychologically at the hands of whites, leaves s with NO affinity for that sort of thing.
For Black men even in these situations, there are some bounds we tend NOT to cross.
This is about the white boy projecting HIS perception of sexual aggression onto Black men; it's about the collect cultural view of us as less than Human, as ANMALS of the basest order!
Try again,NOT good enough. BTW there is something available called;"Spell Check!"
Posted by Me Hello this's the writer of the story. Actually you were right with every word you said, and I really cared to your mind. this changed the way to write all my diary, stories, and even communicating with people. THANX
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