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Posted by czykguy
David,I don't buy this at all.
The passions behind the decision to make a life together are glossed over and the sex is too perfect. I also cannot believe that any gay guy in prison is going to remain celibate, the opportunity for sexual satisfaction/gratification in prison is a gigantic force, look at the TV series OZ, look at the British film 'Scum'. Sex is always on a man's mind and even more so on a gay guy's mind, especially locked up with dangerous or vunerable men and it is unlikely that Tommy would have been locked up on his own for all that time.
Coming out of prison is also different, in five years a lot of things gave changed and this difference always gives the ex-con the feeling that they are under a spotight and that everyone knows where they have just come from.
Sorry but it does not hang true for me.
Posted by David
Dear czykguy:
My boyfriend (Tommy) is currently incarcerated. He asked me to write a "fantasy" story about him and I and it would have to be (according to him) our first time meeting. So, to that end, I created the story. The story was written for that purpose but I did, however, warn him that I would post the story over the web. I never expected it to get any reviews let alone any ratings. I did promise him that it would be a continuing story. Personally I find that most erotic short fiction is short on plot and long on sex and that is the whole idea behind most of these stories. According to most of the men that I've talked to, they don't want a long drawn out story line and it doesn't even have to make sense! They just want to get to the part that is going to get them off. I do, however, thank you for your honesty.
Sincerely,
David G.
Posted by Dale
Sorry, czykguy, but I truly loved the story. It's "shortcomings" didn't bother me at all. I only wish I could find my own "Tommy." David, my good friend, I wish you and Tommy the best of everything if and when your actual coupling can take place. I hope it is just as you have pictured it here. I do want to know how the story turns out, as I care for you. Sorry, guess this isn't turning out to be much of a review, but I did love the story--it will keep me looking for my own guy out there.
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