Tommy and me

(Part 1 from 1. Fiction.)

 hello this story my offend some people and it is a mixture of true and false - m name is willy and i have a "step brother in law" he is a drunk but has a great body he's not the fittest in the world but has muslces - tommy works in a coal mine and so he naturally comes home dirty and sweaty tommy can become mean if he dosent get his way so he can make me feel weird in more ways than one. tommy like to call me a faggot or a gay boy and i dont know y because im still in the closet

By the time i got into the ninth grade i had started to accept the fact that i was gay and by the tenth grade i started to get crushes on men and likeing what i saw. when i first say tommy half naked i was in the 5th grade and i was locked out of my house so i walked over to my sister's house because i knew tommy would b there to let me in when i got there the only thing he had on way loose boxers that had the slit on his crotch with no button so i could see inside - though at the time it ment nothing to me now when i look back on it it turns me on think about it -

it was the summer between my 9th grade and my 10th grade year . i had been spendign alot of time with renee and her family one day the kids wanted to go swimming and so didnt tommy (wich made me very excited) he had that man musk smell about him wich turned me on once we got into the pool area we layed down. i waited until tommy put down his towell the i rushed to lay as close to him as i could with out making him suspicous after a little while of playing around i just happend to look up as tommy was getting up and noticed he had a hard on wich gave me one i couldnt stand it it was huge. after a while i went to the rest room to releave some of that presure . now the bath room at the local swimming pool isnt the best and only have cutrians. as i was jerking i heard someone come into the restroom and it was TOMMY he flew the curtians open and caught me. you saw my hard on and it turned you on didnt it you faggot i was in shock i couldnt move i wanted so bad to jump up and run away but i couldnt i was in a trance until i felt a sharp pain aginst my face tommy slaped me. once he saw i was paying attention agin he calmed down and told me to put my dick away and get back out to the rest of the family for the rest of the day i tried my hardest to keep my eyes away from tommy.


i finally got home i ran to my room started up my computer and looked up my favorite gay prono sight and worked off my hard on. after a while mom got home from church and asked me how my day was i lied and said that it was ok. after a while my sister called and said my neace and nephew wanted me to stay the night. i asked her if tommy would be there ( renee knows how he scares me ) she said he was gonna be out partying all night and wouldnt be back until 2:30 in the mornning so i agreed to it because i figured id be well asleep by then.... i spent most of the evening helping my sister with her children ... renee made my bed on her couch in the livvign room around 3:30am i was woken up with someone punding on the door. it was tommy and he was drunk and lost his house key i got up and opend the door.

i didnt realize just how drunk tommy was until i opend the door and he fell on top of me and almost made me fall. thow i didnt mind havving tommys body and mine pushed together he was drunk and smelled awful i knew no matter how hard i tried i wouldnt b able to get renee out of bed it was up to me to take care of this drunken idiot that i loved so much. i drug him from the front door back to the bath room taking pauses every little bit all the time tommy kept mubbling about how much a fag i was and how he loved me and on and on but he was drunk and didnt mean any of it. i finally got him to the bath room where i laid him beside the comode while i went and got him something to sleep in.

my sister hadnt gotten any laundri done so all he had was his boxers two whear so i undressed his puke covverd clothing and replaced it with the boxers then i dragged him down the hall to his room - rennee usually sleeps in the kids room - i laid tommys upper body on the bed then flipped his legs up then before i knew it he grabbed me and pulled me up aginst his chest the he rolled over flipping me with him. i was in hevean. i squirmed and yanked but couldnt get away from him but i didnt want to anyway i was in pure hevan i wanted it to last. i thought about trying to kiss him but i was to afraid i knew he would beat me into a pulp if i would wake him up

to be continued .....

please comment this was my first writing and i would like to write more but i need to know if i should if i get enough replys tht say yes ill keep writing about me and tommmy and my fantacies well thanks for reading......

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