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Undead Love : Part 2 reviews

Posted by Greg
What a great story...can't wait for the next part. Man...this really made me so horny.
Posted by Molly
i LOVED it! BEST story on this website by FAR!! PLZ PLZ make a part 3 soon you are a gifted writer! thxs so much for writing this!!
Posted by David Bula
guys i decided there wont be a part 3
Posted by The Real David Bula
Lol uhhhh ok who ever wrote there wont be a part 3 under my name is lying. I am just going back and forward between two stories.
Posted by River
I love your stories. There is so much going on and it's not just about sex but actual love and overcoming obstacles. Keep writing these wonderful stories and I can guarantee you'll always have at least one fan reading them.
Posted by James
Omg best story every!!!!!!!!!!! I love it can't wate to read more u have me hooked
Posted by David
You r such a grate righter I love your story's this one is my favorite can't wate to read the next ch!!!!!!!!'
Posted by Greg
More please I'm loving it!!!!!!!!!
Posted by angel
Just so amazing I wished it was a book so I can finish reading it but please continue
Posted by angel
Plz continue
Posted by angel
OMG plz finish soon
Posted by Sam
I just love your work Mr. David....Your story always gives hope for those finding love....makes you believe in love
Posted by morpheus banderra
the comment on the first story applies to this one as well. you are extremely talented and dont let anyone tel you otherwise
Posted by kevin
where's the next part!?!?!? i've been waiting forever for it
Posted by andrew
I loved part 2
Posted by andrew
your stories are great and they make me realy horny! i can't wait till part three. as i type this i start to cum on my self over the sex seen.
Posted by andrew
i love the part wher they crack the wall. i wish that would happen to me!
Posted by andrew
mr. david you make me want to have sex with you.
Posted by andrew
in my mind you look sexy
Posted by David bula
ok so there is not gonna be a part 3 i just got married to my bf so...
Posted by The real David Bula
So yeah LOL these hackers are getting serious LOL first of all I don't even have a bf so I am not getting married. Second I decided to continue football love first then I'll come back to this one. Thank you so much for your comments guys
Posted by kevin
i read all yur stories multiple times!!! yu r simply amazing, cant wait till part 3
Posted by it's Barbie Barbie Bitch
i love all your stories you should publish them
Posted by Ashkan
Would u plz write part3.i just can't wait anymore. the balance between violence and love in ur stories is awsome.ur stories arent just about sex and that makes them amazing. describtions of sex scenes are amzing too.
Posted by Louie
oh mah god !!! major cliff hanger please update this story soon! \./ i really love your stories haha can't wait for the part 3
Posted by jb
Come on write a part 3 already this was the best
Posted by Gay Bou
Please Write It Fast Cant Wait
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