Posted by Danny Please continue (: these series are awesome !!! Must know what's going to happen next. I'm hoping Tyler and Eddie goes out (: but I also like Kai's relationship with Eddie so I don't know :/ continue please (:
Posted by loony where's part 3?
Posted by Carlos Omg wat an asshole! Hes a cheater but dont cheaters just TURN u on! Like omg they just srem soo hot to me ! Anyways keep the story goiin please and poor ty omg :)))
Posted by seth Hey it's me again.Well it's awonderful story and I relly enjoy it but (there always but.lol) the three parts before were better.You relly have skills and Ill be very glad to meet you and know you better
Im waiting for the real story and thank you very much Kai.
Posted by Kieran Lee Thankyou for all the comments! :) And Seth, I completely agree. I mean I prefer to write about Kai and Eddie's relationship however I want to start bringing all the other characters into the story now. Thanks for reading, i'm glad you enjoy them. :)
Posted by Carlos (again) iidea!!!!!!
Wat iif u make then into seperate story-s i mean i like this one better than the other one cause eddies sounds all skinny and no muscles nothing and like extremely skinny boys with big butts look disgusting! Just sounds UGH! U know? I like this one better because TJ is such a player and ii kinda liike that about hiim cause there isnt alot of stories out there involving the second male charactor beign like a player and or cheater thats why it makes this story a little more original
Posted by Kieran Lee I get what your saying Carlos. However i've already planned out the rest of the story and in includes all the other characters. You like TJ so don't worry, there will be plenty more about him and his ways throughout the series. :)
Posted by Carlos (once agaiin) Holly shit balls! Thanksssss lol (: i dont know why but Tj iis just like, icant even explain it i can just relate to hiim better and eddi gets on my nerves he sounds evil! Lol TJ is just amaziiiing!!!!!!! The next pqrt should be about TJ and whats his face (i only fOcus on TJ ) just saying.
Idea! Him and kai should like get together siince thay r both amazing-ly hot (i think). I cant stop thinking about TJ! I think im in love....lol :)))))))))))
Posted by Brandon Keep writing plzz!!! :D. Your stories are amazing. Keep them coming!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by James You have to continue, you can't stop!! :)
Posted by Seth well carlos idont think TJ and Kie will be together it will be awful cause they are so diferent
Posted by Brandon When is the next part gunna be here?
Posted by Kieran Lee Soon, I posted it yesterday. :)
Posted by Web Cam The story is going well Kieran. :) You've got me and many other people hooked ;). Keep up the good work.
Posted by edgar wait what happend here?? i was reading chaoter 3 nd now on this one what happend to the tent and them falling asslep together? do i keep reading im reallyyyy confused here :(((
Posted by michael 3 i love this so much