Posted by Max I think, although you write well, this is an incredibly un-acurate porrayal of a gang-rape scenario, and couldn't help feeling like you were glorifying it at times. As a victim of this type of thing myself, I know it doesn't ahppen at all like this, well at least not to me. I hope I'm wrong, anyone gloryfying this action is just as bad as the ones who do it.
Posted by Dylan I agree with Max! This was distrurbing, especially because the kid bled and cried - and hated it! I am in a frat, and though some of my frat brothers and I fuck each other regularly, its all consentual - and very hot! Realistically, one of those guys would have gotten up and taken that kid to the campus nurse or whatever! I would have kicked their asses first, personally! Dude, that's just a rough subject matter! I hope that in Part 2, it was just a bad dream, and the kid has a great first time guy experince, like mine was.
Posted by J. Nack To Dylan: I've read part 2 and sorry to say, it happens nothing like you had hoped.
Posted by David Although I find the content disturbing and at some points repulsive, there is some hope for the main character. It is a plausible plot and does seem glorified at points, at others, it does come across as a quite possible storyline. Thing is, the fact that the main character is only 16, leaves me thinking, how awful it must be if this actually happens on campuses.
Posted by JasonBottomBoy God you people, this is Just a fucking fantasy...Get over it.
Posted by JasonBottomBoy And by the way, I did put that it gets pretty graphic and that if that offends you, you should leave...But these guys at agaysex changed it to this incorrect sentence "***DISCLAIMER! This COMPLETELY FICTIONAL story!!!"
Posted by gregggbot i thought it was alright but i would like you to may anda girl in it yae know tryin to comfort the jason i felt so bad for him
Posted by Ralph Great story, how did you come up with it? I will now read the therd part.
Posted by paandi Stupid funcking gays stop posting your sites and stupid stories on the net
Posted by Brad paandi, whoever u r, if u straight guys can do it why cant us gays do it huh? and how fucking gay r u when r on this site???????? and that u cant even spell fucking right, stupid straight boy
Posted by Kyaw Swa Shein rate 9.00
I like your story very much.
really really exiciting
Posted by alden fuckin amazing
Posted by willy it wuz good thogh im not espically into story's like this but i half to read more
Posted by Mike you're good, you should write more rape stories. you should make the bottom not be such a bitch though. Make him fight and get his ass kicked but no suck a bitch. But put lots of big guys and big dicks in it. Good job keep writing!!!!!!! You make me bust in my shower
Posted by tabitha holy crap! the begining was good. that was some messed up shit. i dont think i'll be reading part 2 though.
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