Posted by brandon Yes please! I love it, good plot!
Posted by oscar yes i want to know what happens
Posted by Al Great story! :)
I can't wait for the next part!
Posted by Mitchell Really god I hope there is a nother chapter in this story loved it hope to read more soon
Posted by Simon write more i loved this!!
Posted by Victor DAME DUDE UR STORIES R SO FUCKING AWSOME I LIKED PART 1 AND PART 2 I HOPE U MAKE A PART 3 THEY TURNED ME ON BUT NOT N A SEXUAL WAY I CANT EXPLAIN IT THAT GOOD BUT YEAH I GUESS UR STORIES CALLED OUT 2 ME UR A GOOD FUCKING STORY WRITER KEEP IT UP U WERE BORN 4 THIS!!!
Posted by Eric The story was great. It kinda reminds me of some of the things that i experienced in high school. I so hope you write another story. I would like to find out what happened to pat and justin. Like will they stay friends or well justin grow up and tell pat he loves him and is sorry?
Posted by kaell great story loved it. you wanted advice? one of them would be to just double check your work before you submit it or try to get someone to check it for you as spelling and grammatical errors can hinder the flow of a good a story. hope this helps you. id be happy to check over your work for you. contact me at kaellrichards_56@hotmail.com
Posted by Jorge Please keep writing its getting good,
And this story somewhat is like my life.
Please keep writing.
Posted by jose oh god that was like really good.....u should care less about ur spelling......every part of it was so exciting and great, i hope u continue!?!?!