Posted by Ervaine Great stuff. Please keep them coming
Posted by Jorge Wow, its like I'm falling in love with your storys lol.
Please keep writing. I love this.
Posted by Leo WOW I LOVE YOUR STORIES. I HOPE YOU WRITE MORE SOON. THERE GREAT REALLY THEY ARE. CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE
Posted by Louie wow! this story is just fantastic i love it so much. you made a beautiful story, i like it because there's not much sex in it lol hope for the sequel soon
Posted by Jorge God, I had to read this story all over again, I think I'm like in love with these storys keep writing please
Posted by Simon Awesome awesome story cant wait for next instalment.
Posted by Joe Very good. Keep 'em coming.
Posted by jose that was really good i had to read the whole thing again hahaha it was just good and im just waiting for part5
Posted by Kenny U HAVE to email me when the next part of Wishful Thinking is released..i fell in luv with the series :) blahblahblah_245@yahoo.com
Posted by Cal Omg i love reading it. Its so sweet but the thing is that i can relate to it all. This is what is happening with me but Idk wat to do. I love reading the stories and hope it wont be long till part 5. Can you Plz tell me how long it will be. And does anyone any other stories that are like this with not a lot of sex but really good stories. If so Plz email me at Liacal@hotmail.co.uk. Plz xxx
Posted by Cam Really good story. Love that it actually has some real substance to it.
Posted by wow500 You are fuckin' amazing...
Your story has what all great stories have...
A hero and a villian- a protagonist and an antagonist.
But, i am curious about Tyson's overall role in this, at first i thought Sam was going to be the rival love interest. But i have been wrong before, not often though!)
But is Tyson stalking Patrick or something? God this story is good. I love your play on conflict.
But... a friendly word of advice...People may cheer for the hero, but they love to hate the villian, and they will only love the hero as much as they hate the villian. Peace
Posted by David Rogers keep that story going please really hot story