Posted by Peter Hi Luis! Jason told me to check out your stories, so when I heard this from him I thought you would be similar to him but you're completely different, not in a bad way though. Im really enjoying seeing what happens to November and can't wait for the next part.. Keep it up!
Posted by Jason Hey :) You're getting better so keep writing! I think you're really unique with your ideas and you're just different to most stories that people do here. I'm looking forward to finding out where you're taking this :) Just make sure you don't rush through it, try to be really descriptive. But for this only being your second story I think you're doing really well!
Posted by Luis Adrian Araico Olvera Thanks! I won't rush it, the story has a lot to give yet...hopefully... nah joking it will get better! Thanks again for all the reviews!
Posted by orion well great continuation, continue the story