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Posted by Prince B.
DANG!:( DAVID BULA THE STORY WAS SO SOON TO END! :( BUT IT WAS GREAT! NOOOOOOO!! :( MY HEART JUST BROKE! PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING WITH LONG CHAPTERS! :) PLEASE!
Posted by Carlos
Watttt!!!! NOoooo way! U need to tell us who he stays with!!!! UGHH!
Posted by Abe
Noooooooo!!! it cant end, not now!! plz dont!! keep going~!!!
Posted by David Bula
Sorry guys but the story ends here. I like the idea to make my readers decide the guy David stays with. Personally I think it's andrew but it's up to you really. I'll think about making the last part a bit longer.
Posted by Nick
:( such an awesome story, sucks that it ends here :(
Posted by Carlos
I think he should stay with ryan becausr i feel like he would have a more stable future with him and i mean lets cut the crap andrew was gone for a long time wat if that happens again and ryan is willing to lose it all for david even his job! I think ryan is the best CHOICE! Please atleast make the last part longer or something or keeep goin i love the story its wat made me come back to this website day after day and now its over! OMG! Buttttttt the story was good sooo well written! :)))))))))
Posted by Chad
I love this story! I do wish that some parts didn't go so fast, but I love it and the obvious choice is Andrew, the first love. But Ryan will be able to bounce back. Maybe they can have a polyamorous relationship? Haha I'll take Ryan if David doesn't though c:
Posted by p.auvaa684@gmail.com
i love this story..it made me cry.. I am a Trans in love with your story, But I hate the ending..LOL.... I would Choose Ryan for David..
Posted by Josh
FUCK U CAN'T DO THAT TO US!!!!!!!!
=(
honestly though bud, this is actually the best story i've ever read..pathetic, but i'm actually tearing up rite now.
who in ur mind does David choose in the end?? just wondering.
Posted by Josh
I agree..hate the ending :P LOL
and sry, didnt realize u already posted who you think he ends up with..i personally think Ryan as well.
Please continue the story!!!!
or write a new one?? please?? PRETTY PLEASE?
Posted by ash
oh god how i like that much of your story,,, if david could take them one at a time. . . Hehe kidding. . . . But it's so sad to end up just like that, it crushes my heart... Wish you will you continue more, i still can't decide which of the. God i love them all. . .but, well, well hard to choose. Please, end it up with who he will cho0se. Anyway, it's the best!
Posted by marcuz
The ending is just like "Children Of Men" making the reader choose what happens to the character. Very creative, never seen this approuch in a story before, also nice manipulation of the words when referring back to the past.
Delighted reading your series ")
Posted by jacob
I love ur story. Really do, but did you really have to end it there? I mean c'mon! I would love to find out who David ends up with. To be honest, I hope it's Ryan. But could you plz write the fourth part? Plz?
Posted by Arthur
I cried till the very end of this story. I just couldn't hold back the tears as I read through what David had to go through those two years and at the beginning. It is really hard to make a choice in your life, no matter what the choice is because there will always be consequences you have to face alongside your decision wether you like it or not. Yeah, I am writing this with tears still in my eyes because the story is now swirling through my brain cells. I will always remeber it and also, I have bookamrked it down my browser, so I can read it through again. Really amazing :)
As for with whom David stays together by my thoughts... There are reasons WHY David would stay with Andrew and there are reasons WHY he would stay with Ryan. But if you'd ask me as a reader - it is pretty much obvious he is staying with the one, who gave ultimate promise.
Posted by Arthur
One last thing - Last sentence makes me wonder.
Could it be...?
Posted by Cris P.
WTF!!!! y the hell u end it!?!?! u got to keep typing! we want more! common! u cant end it like that! thats so unfair and self fish!! RIGHT MORE!!!
Posted by Rick
Aww... Great story dude. The best I've read so far. Your my favorite author here now. But WHY?!?! why did you have to leave it blank. Now I won't be able to think anything else. I knew you would bring andrew back. I just knew it. Which kinda sucks. Sigh. Personal question dude, who would you have chosen, if you don't mind answering.
Rick
Posted by Rick
Nevermind. Saw your other post.
Like the other commenters. Continue writing.
SUGGETION. Can you continue the story, but with two ending. For each guy. We can choose which we one ourselves. But I wanna know how it ends but not the choice itself. We can make things up in our minds, but we choice to read your style. So it would be better to give a two choice with your style in it. That is if you could. Thanks
Posted by Peter
Its ryan its always been ryan and the old man knew it
Posted by David Bula
Check out the new story!!!!!!
Posted by Jack
David i totally agree with you Andrew deserves David. He is suffered alot. Lov this story.josh4life34@yahoo.com
Posted by Ginger
Ok so I get the point of an open ending story so that readers can't get mad with what you chose but COME ON MAN!!!!! I can't choose so choose for me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Posted by Damon Campbell
I loved the story... More of a sad emotional story than a sex story... I was in tears a couple of times I loved it thanks for that.
Posted by Denys
wow....great story.
keep writing, mate
Posted by DW
Well, I love this story, and I'm a person who can't really choose. I'm leaning more towards Andrew, but I still have a felling its Ryan. I would settle with either. Great story as well. :)
Posted by Ortiz sam
Ryan is d man!! No doubts
Posted by Annissa
this story was so romantic. lol :)
anyways, i cried when Eugene died and during the funeral part.
i am so frustrated. who is it???
Andrew was the first one. But he seems different. If he isnt chosen, would he commit suicide because he waited for David and when he came home he was rejected?
Ryan helped David and he seems a bit nicer than Andrew because David & Andrew went out because David just thought that Andrew was cute but Ryan was the firefighter who sort of saved his life.
Lol. just my thoughts.
We should like totally take a poll or something.
Keep on writing David Bula. U Rock.
Posted by Annissa
BTW. i totally agree with Carlos up there.
Posted by nathan
well that is the same thing that he told him about ryan so i am guessing ryan but we all know that andrew is and will always be his first love..
Posted by Nathan
i love all of your stories and i even cried through them all! i was in the military myself and i know how much it changes you and i can relate to andrew but at the same time dadid is torn between two men and can not choose wich i can also relate with. Not to sould cruel but i personally believe that he will choose ryan because he has already lost andrew and to him he was already dead. I am just glad that i did not have to go through all that david had to! keep writing David Bula i love your work!! on a softer note when are you going to finnish the soldiers story?
Posted by X
Simply Fantastic. You are amazing. I love how you leave it open ended. As I was reading and even now I am still trying to figure out who he stays with. Truly amazing.
Posted by jasmie
omg, that was fantastic, even though it was sad at times, it was great
Posted by "A"
Oh my god...i'm crying...this story is so great...oh my god...i'm still crying now,sniff...
Posted by rodrick
is it andrew i was put in this same spot 4 years ago
Posted by rodrick
i know what David is going threw
Posted by Lee
Beautiful story well done!!!
Posted by Cash
He gonna choose Andrew they both went thru hell and back 4 each other and their love is more powerful than wat he had 4 Ryan(Dnt get me wrng Ryan love 4 him was sexy) I dnt see Andrew hurtin David @ all He said it himself he won't hurt him and is willin 2 make things up for the last 3 years he's been gone, Truly A Good Love Story David Bula I Love All Yur Work You Should Make More I Look 4word 2 Readin Thm
Posted by Samuel
This is incredible! I love all of your stories and this one was one of the best! Had me in tears at one point and jut brilliant. Also can relate to so many of the emotions that you manage to cram in the story! You are true inspiration Thank You:-)
Posted by Elliot
I would say niether beacuse I honestly couldn't bear being in love with two people and having to break ones heart so I would just love them both but never actually be with them so neither of them could get to hurt:'(
Posted by Eric
ANDREW ALL THE WAY!! 3
Posted by Alex
Omg noooo please finish the story i need it i want it please please please i cried and i wanna know who he gets with
Posted by Sam
oh nice i dont know who i would have choosed
Posted by Sam
I would pray to have a lover like Andrew or Ryan but not both of them....its worse then hell to choose...its so hard but I think Dvid will choose Andrew...well i think they both grew up together in a sense in college and i feel they share a deep bond...
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