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A story : Part 3 reviews

Posted by Carlos
Watttt!!!! NOoooo way! U need to tell us who he stays with!!!! UGHH!
Posted by David Bula
Sorry guys but the story ends here. I like the idea to make my readers decide the guy David stays with. Personally I think it's andrew but it's up to you really. I'll think about making the last part a bit longer.
Posted by Chad
I love this story! I do wish that some parts didn't go so fast, but I love it and the obvious choice is Andrew, the first love. But Ryan will be able to bounce back. Maybe they can have a polyamorous relationship? Haha I'll take Ryan if David doesn't though c:
Posted by ash
oh god how i like that much of your story,,, if david could take them one at a time. . . Hehe kidding. . . . But it's so sad to end up just like that, it crushes my heart... Wish you will you continue more, i still can't decide which of the. God i love them all. . .but, well, well hard to choose. Please, end it up with who he will cho0se. Anyway, it's the best!
Posted by jacob
I love ur story. Really do, but did you really have to end it there? I mean c'mon! I would love to find out who David ends up with. To be honest, I hope it's Ryan. But could you plz write the fourth part? Plz?
Posted by David Bula
Check out the new story!!!!!!
Posted by Ginger
Ok so I get the point of an open ending story so that readers can't get mad with what you chose but COME ON MAN!!!!! I can't choose so choose for me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Posted by Ortiz sam
Ryan is d man!! No doubts
Posted by Annissa
BTW. i totally agree with Carlos up there.
Posted by X
Simply Fantastic. You are amazing. I love how you leave it open ended. As I was reading and even now I am still trying to figure out who he stays with. Truly amazing.
Posted by "A"
Oh my god...i'm crying...this story is so great...oh my god...i'm still crying now,sniff...
Posted by rodrick
is it andrew i was put in this same spot 4 years ago
Posted by rodrick
i know what David is going threw
Posted by Eric
ANDREW ALL THE WAY!! 3
Posted by Alex
Omg noooo please finish the story i need it i want it please please please i cried and i wanna know who he gets with
Posted by Sam
oh nice i dont know who i would have choosed
Posted by Sam
I would pray to have a lover like Andrew or Ryan but not both of them....its worse then hell to choose...its so hard but I think Dvid will choose Andrew...well i think they both grew up together in a sense in college and i feel they share a deep bond...
Posted by Ethan
I hate open ended stories!!!!! Parts one and two were great but the end of part three makes me mad!!!!
Posted by Louie
oh i forgot andrew is the one for david 33
Posted by Jonah
I love it g00d j0b david thanks again for a simply remarkable story love always your fan jonah
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