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Posted by dan
was ok and story was good but it would be better with speech marks so we know who is saying what. seperate the speaking from the story.
otherwise its good
Posted by VC
that story was hot, but speech marks would have given it an edge, proper good story though mate, nearly blew my cock right off, please write more, maybe you could develop a kind of bondage session in the back of the club or something, mark being made to become the guys slave.. sorry i love that stuff neway keep it up, lol
Posted by mark
good story
do you unsderstand run on paraghe
your story is hot but no breaks for the reader to, get it all. Periods and commas work well.
Break it up. Please don't makeit long to hard to read.
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